Your octopus looks great when seen very close, but on the board it looked very lost. Your detail up close is great the mixture of texture and color give the visual appearance of skin. Your shading adds the depth and that was accentuated by the color choice - the blue comes out of the red purple. You are obviously a very competent artist and pay great attention to the detail of each section. The bummer was simply the very small size of the object. On the bright side you know how to work on very very small objects and get great detail. Thanks for the hard work
Name: Nikki Bug Octopus 1. The Atlantis is hard work and very connected to the image you were trying interpret. Your color is vibrant and declares you intent. The integration of text as image is very successful. The background gradient works well but the color needs to be more in contrast to the Text. I sort of would have liked to see a bit more variety in your shape definition of your octopus – might help with giving in a bit more emphasis 2. The mermaid is fantastic – congratulations! The use of the curves and their connection to the text is excellent. Things moving off the page adds depth You did an amazing job with your design and application. Obviously this reflects in your talent! 3. Not needed did enough with first 2
Your octopus looks great when seen very close, but on the board it looked very lost. Your detail up close is great the mixture of texture and color give the visual appearance of skin. Your shading adds the depth and that was accentuated by the color choice - the blue comes out of the red purple. You are obviously a very competent artist and pay great attention to the detail of each section. The bummer was simply the very small size of the object. On the bright side you know how to work on very very small objects and get great detail. Thanks for the hard work
ReplyDeleteName: Nikki Bug Octopus
ReplyDelete1. The Atlantis is hard work and very connected to the image you were trying interpret. Your color is vibrant and declares you intent. The integration of text as image is very successful. The background gradient works well but the color needs to be more in contrast to the Text. I sort of would have liked to see a bit more variety in your shape definition of your octopus – might help with giving in a bit more emphasis
2. The mermaid is fantastic – congratulations! The use of the curves and their connection to the text is excellent. Things moving off the page adds depth You did an amazing job with your design and application. Obviously this reflects in your talent!
3. Not needed did enough with first 2